List some specifics here.Should the introduction be expanded or tightened? Why?Does the introduction announce the layout of the rest of the paper? What lets you know this?Has the writer made you want to learn more? Why or why not?Body:
Underline the topic sentences on the paper. Is there a clear connection between each of the paragraphs and the thesis? If not, where do you see problems?Are points substantiated with evidence? Is the evidence pertinent, reliable, and/or verifiable?Are paragraphs unified (exploring only one idea)? Point out paragraphs that lack unity.Are paragraphs developed (is there enough information in each paragraph)? Point out paragraphs that lack development.Are there in-text citations in MLA style if sources are used?Conclusion:
Is the thesis restated (and, if possible, reworded)? Is the length of the conclusion appropriate? Does it need to be tightened or expanded? Why?What strategies does the paper use to close the discussion (ex: brief summary of points, recommendation)?Are you interested in learning more about (has the author made the topic relevant to you)? Why or why not?Overall Recommendations:
Are there issues related to grammar and punctuation that the author needs to address? If so, what are they?Have sources been quoted correctly, if sources were used?Is the Works Cited formatted correctly, if sources were used?List three strengths (what you feel the author did well) and three weakness (areas that need improvement) of the paper.
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