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I. What are the main sections of this report/story? List the main parts: The body is the main part, when I tell what actually happened with the two groups not getting along
2. What is the main thematic focus of this essay/report/narrative? Has the writer narrowed the focus to 1-2 main ideas only? Explain.3. Do the support paragraph(s) support the theme/thesis? How so?4. Is there enough 50% or more discussion one specific scene? Explain your answer.
5.. Are there sudden shifts or choppy parts? (within paragraphs or between paragraphs) Where? Where would additional transitions be helpful?
6. Does the essay contain description? Is the description imagistic? Explain.
7. What part of the description is most clear and vivid? Quote some.
8. What words and/or phrases are most effective? Quote some.
9. What is the weakest part of the body of the essay? Where? Quote it or describe that section.10. What words and/or phrases are dull or confusing? Quote. Also, find and record here one clich. Quote.
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