Once you accept the order can I message my classmates’ essays? Instructor post: Answer the following questions about your partner’s essay and post this in the Peer Review Discussion Post on the next page. Does the thesis need to be more specific? Is there a clear claim? Does the thesis provide the so what? to the connection established? 4. Name the different ideas addressed in the essay. Does each body paragraph present a new idea? Is there any repetition? 5. Do the textual examples support the topic sentence presented in each body paragraph? 6. Is there a context/summary that allows you to smoothly transition into each textual example? 7. Does each paragraph present analysis that explains what ideas and insights are presented in both texts? Does the analysis answer the why? and so what? and support the topic sentences and examples? 8. Is the organization of the essay confusing in any way? If so, how and why? 9. Does the essay stray too far from the thesis topic? If so, explain. 10. Point to the strongest parts of the essay. Explain. 11. Point to places in the essay your partner needs to work on. Explain and offer suggestions. 12. How did your partner establish his or her voice? Is it effective? Why or why not? 13. What is not fitting? Point to or underline parts of the essay that can be removed or parts that are straying too far from established claims and textual evidence. 14. Point to places where there is repetition of ideas. 15. How are transitions working in this essay? How can your partner improve transitions between sentences and paragraphs? 16. What else needs to be addressed in the essay?
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